User talk:Ayebeesung

This article was the subject of an educational assignment in Spring 2015. Further details were available on the "Education Program:Saint Louis University/Developmental Biology (Spring 2015)" page, which is now unavailable on the wiki.

Hello Abby! Hope you have a nice day as well!

Article selection[edit]

Hi Ayebeesung - I have looked at the article choices in your sandbox and all three are in serious need of some work! My preference among them would be the otic vesicle article. The entire content seems to have been cut and pasted from some other free encyclopedia on the web. It is too technical and not well written. I notice that the reference you included in your sandbox on this article is a primary source. If you search Pubmed for "otic vesicle" AND review, I think you will find several review articles, which are secondary sources, and will be more helpful. You may also want to consider the option of adding a little bit of content to several related articles, rather than just working on one article. In this case, when you start researching the topic, you may find that you'd rather work on otic vesicle, otic pit and otic placode as a group that are closely related topics. In any case, you will want to make sure these articles are linked. If you agree with this choice, please add your selection(s) to the table at the bottom of the course page. And have fun! Biolprof (talk) 17:19, 22 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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		Fanstastic job on your wikipedia project. I hope you will continue to contribute to Wikipedia. Biolprof (talk) 01:41, 15 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]