User talk:Erinebusby

This user is a student editor in Clackamas_Community_College/English_Composition_(Summer_2018) .

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Hello, Erinebusby, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:35, 6 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Erin! How long have you lived in Oregon? I love finding new trails to explore in the Gorge and camping on Mt. Hood. What are some of your favorite Oregon things to do? -Miranda----

Encinas.geralene (talk) 03:52, 11 July 2018 (UTC)Hey Erin! My name is Geralene Encinas. I'm 18 years old. Since you're older than me, your week forums really helps me and gives me ideas. I trust your writing because I assume you've had a lot more experience in writing than me. :) Have a great day! GeraleneEncinas.geralene (talk) 03:52, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi! I have some quick notes for you on your work. The first is to make sure that everything is well sourced - the sourcing is fairly light, so the article could use more sourcing as a whole. Also, make sure that you're careful to stick to a neutral, encyclopedic tone. By large the style is good, but just be careful of narrative or persuasive tones sneaking in. Hope this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:49, 10 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]