User talk:Jadorno

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Evie

I think your first hurdle is to find independent verifiable sources to show that your organisation meets the notability guidelines. The rest is straightforward; nothing copied, even from your own website, neutral non-promotional tone, references for any claims that may be challenged Jimfbleak - talk to me? 18:43, 23 October 2009 (UTC)

I think the problem you have now is that you have a very short lead section, and the only other content is the mssion statement, the latter reading very much as an advertisement. You need some real content. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 07:01, 24 February 2010 (UTC)