User talk:JrvsXavier
The RMS Titanic article is a good article. The overview explains what happened to the ship clearly. It explains the history of the ship and how many people were on board. Reliable sources are used throughout the article. The sources mostly consists of books written as early as 1987.JrvsXavier (talk) 21:52, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
1) Women's Political Council- Its a group founded by women to assist in the African American Civil Rights Movement. It relates to the class content because its apart of the Women's Movement and how they are actively participating in politics to implement new laws
2)Gay-related immune deficiency- It relates to class content because its about how gays were targeted as being the cause of the disease 3) Create an article based on extra credit assignment about how intersectionality/identiy varies based on political participation
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I would recommend making the sub-headings under the boycott section their own section so that it doesn't all run together. other, than that the article is fine. Amazing job!Ava Christine (talk) 04:02, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
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Nice work on your additions to the article Women's Political Council, but there are some issues you should be aware of. Please make sure that your work in mainspace meets the requirements of a Wikipedia article. Please review the sections on article layout in the Editing Wikipedia brochure (pages 7-9) and the checklist on page 15.
- Articles should begin with a lead section that summarizes the entire article, with the title of the article in bold. The paragraph you added to the introduction should appear somewhere after that information, either in the introduction itself or later in the article.
- You added some badly needed citations to the article, but some of them are incomplete. Consider adding more information such as the publisher, publication date, etc. to citations like the one for the King Encyclopedia. The module Sources and Citations will help you with citation format and how to use the same citation for multiple footnotes instead of having multiple duplicate citations for the same source.
- The fixed template and other templates of this type should not appear in the body of the article, they should be reserved for talk page discussions. If you've fixed an issue with the article, you can simply remove the relevant article banner or inline template. I've removed the template from the article.
Please let me know if you have any questions. Rob (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:20, 13 December 2016 (UTC)