User talk:Kara Fennimore

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Hello, Kara Fennimore, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:59, 12 February 2020 (UTC)

Article selections

1. Kiki's Delivery Service

• This is a decently well-developed article. The bulk of the work here would be going through sentence-by-sentence to smooth out sentences and section-by-section to ensure they are ideally shaped. I think it's on its way to GA status given the amount of content here. So you could do it, but it wouldn't be as big of an overhaul. More issues might arise as you look closer but I wouldn't count on that.

1. Viola

• This one also seems well-developed. I'm not sure that there is as much to work on here. Did you see things in particular?

1. Tokyo Mew Mew

• This is a featured article, which means that it has been given the highest rating. Not much you want to shake up here.

1. Tattoo

• This one has a long long history as well as a lot of content. It would be tricky to come in and shake things up. Was there something in particular here that you wanted to work on?

1. Whisper of the Heart

• This one is also pretty well developed. It's got all the necessary sections and the tone seems relatively ok. There is one section that could use needs some obvious work (the filming one) but otherwise, it's not quite as much as we're looking for here.

It seems like you've had some trouble finding the kind of article we're looking for. Look at the ones listed under "available articles" in the WikiEd dashboard to get a better sense of the sweet spot we're after. Let me know if you find some others that you want to run by me. Etherfire (talk) 22:42, 16 February 2020 (UTC)