User talk:OlsonA93
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:33, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
You have an overdue training assignment.[edit]
Please complete the assigned training modules. --Locnamehn (talk) 21:38, 2 October 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I just read your article on work place privacy and the information seemed easy to understand and explain the point clearly. However I did find it a little short. Is there more content that you were thinking about adding. Just one grammatical suggestion I wanted to make is in the first sentence I think you should remove the word must. Employees typically must relinquish some of their privacy while at the workplace, but how much they must do so can be a contentious issue When you say typically must it doesn't seem to it fit. something typical is not a certainty and when you say must it means certainty. they kind of contradict each other. It's used a second time in the same sentence. I think by removing the word must you will still give the same message and won't lose any important content. Good luck with the final touches. Socimajor (talk) 05:43, 5 November 2016 (UTC)