User talk:Rbeach618!!/Streaming television
Review Feedback (week 12 wiki assignment) 11/26[edit]
After reviewing the feedback from my peer I have noted that...
- I probably should have noted my edits and contributions on this talk page here, rather than just making note of what I was doing within my actual sandbox, this was probably a little confusing for my peer to see and try to keep track of, but luckily my edits were made clear
- I could benefit from finding a few more sources because right now I believe I have the minimum, and some of mine are not properly cited/meet the requirements
After reviewing the feedback from Dr. Shaw I have noted that...
- Go over assignment expectations and requirements again
- Improve the quality of writing for the sections that I added: fix some grammatical mistakes, delete repetitions (especially in the same section)
- Add two more PEER REVIEWED sources to meet assignment requirement Rbeach618!! (talk) 04:35, 27 November 2023 (UTC)