User talk:Sbridge4
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Hello, Sbridge4, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:30, 20 September 2019 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
Hi Sbridge4, I peer reviewed your article on the Chapel of the Holy Cross. This article caught my eye because I have visited it a few times, having previously lived near the area, and have an appreciation for the site. I liked the information you added, and I thought it was well sourced and neutral, so kudos on that. The only thing I would add would be a recommendation to include a picture of the ramp leading to the chapel, to really illustrate it for the readers. Other than that, I think you did a great job with this project. Lhawkin7 (talk) 00:13, 10 December 2019 (UTC)Lhawkin7
Peer Review[edit]
I have read your contributions to the article on the Chapel of the Holy Cross (Sedona, Arizona).
I think what you added is great. Adding detail about the architectural features was a great contribution. It helps people who have been there, like me, to understand what it would be like when you approach the building.
Something that could use improvement is in-text citations. You added sources to the page, which is great, but no in-text citations. This makes it hard to understand where information came from. Another improvement to be made is adding links to your sources unless you had physical copies.