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check out this link...How to create a new Article Debastein1 (talk) 18:07, 19 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Article selection ok. - Shirin --Shirin tejani (talk) 04:48, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It seems that there is already alot of material up on the topic of your choice. Can you explain what exactly will be your contribution? - Shirin (09 August 2011)


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Gsinghglakes (talk) 06:44, 6 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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naveenpf (talk) 19:05, 20 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Talkback[edit]

Hello, Shreyanjali16. You have new messages at roux's talk page.
You can remove this notice at any time by removing this template.

I saw your comment on roux's talk page, so here's some info: While some portions of text can be taken from the bill, they will have to be within quotation marks to indicate that they are not your own work. Also, Wikipedia is not a repository for legislation, as an encyclopaedia, what we do on Wikipedia is provide commentary on the legislation. So, what you'll have to do is find sources such as commentary by legal experts, education experts, newspapers etc that explain different aspects of the bill and then paraphrase those into your own words. Rather than create the article in main space, do so at User:Shreyanjali16/Foreign Education Provider Bill in India and when you have added references and we know that it meets Wikipedia's requirements, we can move it to article space. A quick guide for you (work in progress) is available at User:SpacemanSpiff/S3/IEP/FAQ, see the questions and answers at the top to figure out how you should paraphrase, source etc. Let me know if you have any question -- you can do so right at this talk page, immediately after this post. Just start your post with a colon ":" and when replying to posts, make sure to add one additional ":" to the number in the previous post. —SpacemanSpiff 07:39, 14 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

thank you for replying. I will be working on the necessary changes you have asked me to make. But I would request you to restore the rest of the article only if you do not find any copyvios in those sections. As per the suggestions given to me I will work on the Bill part on my sand box and once I have completed I shall post you the link to my sand box for your verification. thank you for helping out.

Shreyanjali16 (talk) 09:02, 14 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Please reply on the talk page where the initial conversation is. If you wish to alert the person that you have responded then you can place {{talkback}} on their talk page. I have copied the above response from you at the talk page of the faq as this is where our discussion started and should continue.
  • In the article, your introduction "A Bill to regulate...incidental thereto." is a verbatim copy of the Bill proposal.
  • Next, your text reads "The Bill was approved by the union Cabinet in March this year and was introduced in the Lok Sabha on May 3, 2010." while the source reads "The foreign universities bill was approved by the union Cabinet in March this year (2010) and was introduced in the Lok Sabha on May 3, 2010."
The above does not qualify as paraphrasing, and most of the article is exactly like this and therefore can not be restored. An example of how to suitably paraphrase the above sentence is "The Foreign Universities Bill was tabled in the Lok Sabha in May 2010 about two months after discussion by the Union Cabinet." cheers. —SpacemanSpiff 11:21, 14 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]