User talk:Vehement921

This user is a student editor in UAlbany/Black_American_Music_(Fall) .

A cupcake for you![edit]

Congrats on your first edit! Wikipedia requires that you only add info that cites other sources. So don't let your edit be reverted. Go GOOGLE and find a reference to the article on Billboard.com or a reputable music source. Not a blog unless it's the artist's own professional blog. Got it? Your prof. sheridanford (talk) 02:39, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Some bubble tea for you![edit]

A 2nd edit. Same goes for your hometown park. "In addition to Seaview Park, Canarsie opened up a skatepark in 2012 that welcomes local skateboarders and bikers." You could cite this source since it mentions skate parks. https://www.nycgovparks.org/parks/canarsie-park. Your job is to paraphrase sources, not write what you know or think without a source.

Here's an examples of an article a student in my summer sociology course at Baruch edited in the Summer of 2016. The latter is about a park in his Canadian hometown: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Race_and_Ethnicity_in_the_NHL (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goldstream_Provincial_Park#Restorative_Justice_and_Goldstream_Park

Your prof. sheridanford (talk) 02:47, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]