Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Billings, Montana/archive2

Billings, Montana[edit]

Changes have been fixed and it's time this goes through again. FireSpike 03:44, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose. The article lacks a reference section, contains too many lists which should be turned into prose, also, has too many one sentence paragraphs. RyanGerbil10 04:14, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose. Fails 2b by a wide mark. Tony 04:54, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose This is a very good start to the article, but all of the sections are too short and should be expanded. *Exeunt* Ganymead | Dialogue? 04:55, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose As per above, "Goverment" & "Economy" should be substantial sections. "History" is way too short & "Future" needs some serious work... etc. More images would also be nice... Mikkerpikker 05:46, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object. Too many short sections/subsections - too many short paragraphs,sentences. Too many lists (these need to be converted into prose). No references? Please see the FA criteria and refer to peer review. — Wackymacs 07:55, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose: as above Giano | talk 09:26, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object per all of other arguments. The article needs to be fixed up to be written better; just one example:

More widely famous people who have lived in Billings include Charles Lindbergh, who once worked as a mechanic at the Billings Logan Airport and performed as a barn stormer. - More widely famous? Needs to be corrected

The article needs copyediting{1 and 2a,b). It also needs references and inline citations(2c). There are way too many sections (3c). AndyZ 15:32, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]