Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Garden City High School (Kansas)/archive2

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 13:58, 24 April 2010 [1].

Garden City High School (Kansas)[edit]

Nominator(s): JHawk88 (talk) 13:04, 20 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured article because I have spent numerous months expanding and editing this article to the point that it is at. I believe it is well-written, comprehensive, well-referenced and otherwise meets the FA criteria. It has been promoted to GA for a fairly long time and the reviewer said that he or she believes it is a good candidate for FA. JHawk88 (talk) 13:04, 20 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comment. Five links to disambiguation pages and three dead external links—see the toolbox to the right. Ucucha 17:29, 20 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Images the self-made pictures are OK, and the logo meets Fair Use. However Image:GCHS rendering.png says Copyright © 2006. GMCN Architects. All rights reserved, so I can't see where the CC-3 licence comes from. Image:GCHS Band 1925.png is not fair use, since it is not essential for the article but may well satisfy PD-old. The author is not Gavin Holman unless he took the photograph, which seems unlikely. Replace with correct photographer so date of death can be checked, or replace with "unknown photographer". Jimfbleak - talk to me? 17:13, 23 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose. Unfortunately, almost all the issues raised in the previous FAC remain. These include reference issues, comprehensiveness and coherence issues, citation quality problems, and the lyrics (which are a possible copyright violation). This should really be withdrawn and given benefit of a good peer review before it comes back to FAC. It needs quite a bit of work yet. --Nasty Housecat (talk) 21:44, 23 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose. Not sufficiently well-written. Linking and MoS issues.

Overlinking: "high school" and "USA" (common terms); doesn't the MoS say to use "US" or "U.S.", not the triple? Why are the colours linked? Please see WP:OVERLINK.
MoS: "fully accredited" (no hyphen after ly).
"serving students in grades 9–12, located in Garden City, Kansas"—couldn't it be: "serving students in grades 9–12 in Garden City, Kansas"?
"The current principal is [long list of senior staff]."—This will need upkeep, so I suggest not right up there in the lead, and "as of 2010"?
"The enrollment for the 2009–2010 school year is approximately 2,000 students." Neater as: "About 2,000 students are enrolled for the 2009–2010 school year."?
Please read what MOSNUM says about '60s and the like. Tony (talk) 08:50, 24 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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