Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Mae Young/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot (talk) 12:59, 29 May 2018 [1].

Mae Young[edit]

Nominator(s): TheBellaTwins1445 (talk) 19:02, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the late professional wrestler Mae Young, she is such an important figure into this business since she was pioneer of it during World War 2, after working a lot of time on this article I think it has gained the chance to be a featured article. TheBellaTwins1445 (talk) 19:02, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: You may have spent a lot of time on the article, but you appear to have taken no notice of the advice given to you here, two weeks ago, when you prematurely nominated a different article. Again, you are nominating without any prior review process or relevant talkpage discussion. Again there are very obvious presentational problems: an inadequate lead, a grossly overlong quotebox in the first section, squeezed text, single-sentence paragraphs, clunky unpolished prose, MoS issues etc. These are the things that a peer review is meant to iron out. Your best step would probably be to seek a mentor (see WT:FAC) to help guide you through the review processes; underprepared nominations are a waste of everybody's time, including your own. Request speedy withdrawal. Brianboulton (talk) 10:13, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Ian Rose (talk) 12:59, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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