Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of American football teams in the United Kingdom/archive2

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The list was promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 25 March 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of American football teams in the United Kingdom[edit]

Nominator(s): ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 18:54, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Renominating this list after the previous nomination stalled due to lack of feedback and support votes. All comments were resolved and no-one opposed the previous nomination. ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 18:54, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support I do not see any issues with this article. Toa Nidhiki05 02:55, 4 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support Only nitpick, the full year should be used in ref # 83.-- Astros4477 (Talk) 22:22, 4 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done Well spotted! ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 07:14, 5 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support Looks good. Reywas92^Talk 22:27, 6 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Crisco 1492 (talk)

What do you mean by "The first truly British teams"? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:13, 12 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

They're the teams set up for the British public, as opposed to the previous teams which were based in American military bases in the UK for their service personnel. Would you say this needs clarifying? ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 14:36, 12 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah. I was reading that as the first teams with entirely British rosters. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:47, 12 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I see what you mean, and amended that statement. ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 14:55, 12 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

How about "The first teams meant for British players..." or "The first teams open to British players...". The term "British public" makes me think of the audience, as if British audiences weren't allowed to watch until 1983. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:59, 12 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done - British players it is! ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 15:10, 12 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support on prose. List seems well referenced, fairly well written. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:21, 12 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

One comment just check for failures of WP:DASH, e.g. ref 137's title should have an en-dash not a hyphen in that year range. Otherwise good stuff! The Rambling Man (talk) 14:59, 16 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done Thanks for picking that up. ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 18:02, 16 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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