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List of Bolivian cities by population[edit]

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Nominator(s): —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 20:17, 10 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it complies with the FL criteria. I modeled the article after another FL (List of US cities by population), and I feel this article is even a bit more in depth that the one mentioned. It is a short article with few references, but I believe it still shows great work. I appreciate all in advance who take the time to review the article. —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 20:17, 10 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Hwy43
*Comments This one is going to need some work. It is light on prose in my opinion, particularly in comparison to the modelled List of US cities by population. A few preliminary comments and questions to start until I have some more time:
  • Needs a map showing the locations of the subject cities.
  • La Guardia is not Bolivia's largest city as the lead asserts, inadvertently albeit. This needs fixing.
    • Reworded it
  • The special characters for department capitals and largest cities in departments are sufficient. The pink shading is redundant for the latter and detracts from the city of La Paz, which is only subject to the former unlike the other department capitals that are subject to both.
    • Removed the color
  • The values in the Change column are too precise. Round them to a tenth rather than the hundredth. Same applies to instances in the lead.
    • The template makes it so it only goes to the hundredth. So I can't change it.
  • The Code column is not encyclopedic and is not meaningful to the reader. It is only meaningful to the INE.
    • Fair enough, removed.
  • Separate the inline citations from the Notes section into their own References section.
    • Completed
  • Are these communities "incorporated" as cities or are they cities in the colloquial sense that may actually incorporated as different municipal statuses?
    • They are all classified as incorporated cities.
      • It would be helpful to know what the requirements are to incorporate as a city. Hwy43 (talk) 06:34, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why is the threshold 10,000? How many cities are there in Bolivia with less than 10,000?
    • I started with 1,000, but I got to around 300 cities, and I felt that amount was too large.
      • Can the article state how many total cities there are in Bolivia? It would be helpful to know how many there are and what percentage of them have a population of 10,000 or greater. Hwy43 (talk) 06:37, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Are areas of each city available? If so, can areas be added as another column? If so, another column to calculate density would also be informative.
    • Sadly, this information is not available.
Be back with more comments when time allows. Hwy43 (talk) 04:07, 11 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Additional comments
  • When I hover the cursor over the map in the lead, the description makes no sense. It reads "List of Bolivian cities by population is located in Bolivia".
  • At the top of the page, add template: {{Use dmy dates|date=February 2014}}
  • Add for all images → |alt=
    • Does it? Per, WP:ALT, "An image that is purely decorative (provides no information and serves only an aesthetic purpose) requires no alternative text." I have added some alt text, however.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 06:23, 17 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
      • Thanks for adding the alt parameters. However, they aren't populated. Please add useful alternative text so that the content and function of the images can be understood by text-only readers. Hwy43 (talk) 08:01, 23 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
        • Oops. My bad. Added some alt text to it.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs)
          • Better. I'd suggest adding a bit more to be descriptive for each. e.g. "City skyline of City Name". Hwy43 (talk) 21:13, 23 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • If the images are moved outside the table as suggested below, they should also have captions.
  • Add scope cols and rows to the table's formatting to conform with MOS:ACCESS.
  • Is there a reference available to support the content within the note?
  • Is there an article about the departments of Bolivia? If so, wikilink "departments" in the lead and "Department" in the table.
  • Wikilink "2012 Census" in the table as well, and "2001 Census" if there is an article available.
Cheers, Hwy43 (talk) 07:32, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Additional comments
  • The lead has been beefed up. Its flow is a little all over the place however. I suggest beginning with the definition of a city, followed by the total amount of cities in the country, the amount at 10,000 or greater, the total population of the 53 compared with the country and then all the particulars (largest, highest increase, the summary of those with negative population growth, the comparison of the county's increase with the increases of the cities) and then close with the two sentences regarding departments (capitals being largest and those with the most and least cities). Hwy43 (talk) 08:36, 23 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • I've fixed the lead up a bit. How does it look now?—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 15:00, 23 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
      • Flow is much better now. Good job. Only thing I think would make it a better read is to consider rewording the three passive voice "there are/were" sentences. Hwy43 (talk) 21:13, 23 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • One final thing. If El Palmar KM 23 had an adjusted 2001 population of 16,572 per the note, reflecting the combined population of the 19 consolidated cities, there is no harm placing this figure in the table in place of the current "0" figure. Hwy43 (talk) 00:45, 24 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support a good list. Good luck the balance of the way. Hwy43 (talk) 03:39, 24 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • Thank you, Hwy43. I appreciate everything you have done to help improve this article.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 14:55, 24 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment Would prefer the photographs to be right justified along the side of the table to remove some of the white space. Ideally in the order of the list itself. Mattximus (talk) 23:56, 11 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • Removed the gallery and placed it in the table area.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 13:28, 12 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
      • Embedding the photos within the table creates excessive blank space within each row. I'd rather see them outside the table to the right, and I don't think we need photos for every city either. Perhaps just the ten largest. Hwy43 (talk) 06:56, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
        • I will have to agree. Mattximus (talk) 19:30, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
          • I have to disagree. For someone like me who has a small screen for my computer, placing the images on the side of the tables makes the images go very far down the page, extending past the references. It looks much cleaner IMO either in the table or as a gallery as it was before.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 19:35, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
            • It appears you've revisited this. Your top five cities multiple image treatment looks great. Hwy43 (talk) 22:47, 17 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment Pictures are much better now, but I'm not sure that graph is very meaningful. In fact, giving a city of 10,000 the same weight as a city of 1,000,000 is misleading. I would remove it in favour of a map, which is pretty necessary for a page like this and would convey the same information. Mattximus (talk) 18:45, 12 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • I am attempting to make a map, however a few cities near the same area, which causes an overlap. Is there any advice for that? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Michael Jester (talk • contribs)
  • Comment: (having stumbled here from my FLC discussion page). Almost ready to support, but just curious why there isn't info from prior census years? — Cirt (talk) 03:43, 25 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • Could you elaborate on this?—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:01, 25 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
      • Yes. 2001 Bolivian census states this was the tenth (10th) census of Bolivia. So why is there not info from the previous nine (9) census compilations? — Cirt (talk) 03:39, 26 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
        • There is info on the 2012 and 2001 census. The only other census in which the data on cities is public is the 1992 census. I can add this to the article, if you want.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 05:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
          • Just thought I'd pipe in that all the recent successful list of municipality FLCs have had only the two most recent census counts. Hwy43 (talk) 06:14, 26 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
            • That's nice. But it seems like WP:RECENTISM and we shouldn't exhibit that as a model for featured quality pages -- especially when looking at WP:WIAFL: Point 3. Comprehensiveness. You see what I mean? — Cirt (talk) 06:16, 28 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
              • Also, it would be nice just as a sidenote, if someone were to create at the very least a nice sourced stub for 1992 Bolivian census. Cheers, — Cirt (talk) 06:20, 28 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
                • If a source is readily available to add a 1992 census population column, I suggest resisting the temptation of including a "Change" column that directly compares the 1992 and 2012 populations. The boundaries of cities between 2012 and 2001 may be different, while there may be further differences between the boundaries of the same between 2001 and 1992. If there was a boundary change between 2012 and 2001, the figure in the current "Change" column may not actually reflect true change within current boundaries. This risk would be compounded if there were different city boundaries for all three years.

                  This is why statistics agencies (US Census Bureau, Statistics Canada, etc.) often only compare current census' counts with the most recent census' counts in its tables, adjusting the counts of the latter where intercensal boundary adjustments have occurred to reflect true changes. This is why most tables in Wikipedia follow suit.

                  If this is confusing, see List of census agglomerations in Alberta where counts from the last four censuses are presented, with various notes associated with certain counts from 1996, 2001 and 2006. No change columns are presented as some entries have one, two or three intercensal boundary adjustments within the 20-year timeframe.

                  Does this help to understand how the pursuit of comprehensiveness to avoid a perception of recentism can result in unintended factual errors? Hwy43 (talk) 07:40, 28 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

                  • I have created an article on the 1992 census. Also, information relating to city population is readily available, if you want I can add it.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 19:52, 28 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

What is the status of this nomination? The 1992 census was not added as promised about one month ago. Why are you creating articles consisting of one sentence and a small table? Could you not merge it to this list? Regards. --Tomcat (7) 15:42, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Delegate comment: This list has been archived. Please wait for at least two weeks before renominating. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:35, 13 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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