Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Norah Jones awards

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The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 06:54, 29 July 2008 [1].

List of Norah Jones awards[edit]

Gary King (talk) 01:24, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent nomination statement :-) Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 01:28, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Keeping it short and succinct Gary King (talk) 01:31, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, nonsense aside, I have a quick comment. In the sentence, She received her eighth Grammy, eleventh overall, for "Best Female Pop Vocal Performance" for her song "Sunrise", "eleven" → "11", per MoS. Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 01:36, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay Gary King (talk) 01:38, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comment - Bold the topic that appears in the first sentence. See WP:BOLDTITLE. -- Reorion (talk) 03:25, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
As I said the last time you suggested this, WP:BOLDTITLE says not to bold when there are links. Gary King (talk) 03:50, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have striked out that comment. Reorion (talk) 04:16, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
- Link "Bengali"
- Perhaps, for context, mention who her father is?
- "Her second album Feels like Home was released" commas before and after the album title?
- "16 million records" - perhaps i'm too 'noveau' but I suspect it's now "units" as in CDs, etc?
- "has won multiple awards" - so literally she's won "more than one"? Can we be NPOV but more imaginative here?
- "nominated for multiple awards " zzz - multiple... sometimes precise is better than vague... reads dull right now though..
- " "Best Pop Collaboration with Vocals" for her collaboration...." - 2 x collaboration -let's work on the repetitive prose.
- ", 11th overall," what does that mean?
- "The song was nominated for a "Grammy Award for Best Pop Collaborations with Vocals" at the 48th Grammy Awards."...... but didn't win. A shame to end an "awards" lead with a failure?
- EL's, don't we have standard templates for commons and quotes?
The Rambling Man (talk) 20:57, 21 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Regarding commas, I try to not use them when I don't have to; I don't believe they need to be used in this instance. Gary King (talk) 21:08, 21 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Current refs 3, 7, and 8 need author information. Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 00:58, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay done Gary King (talk) 01:05, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 7 is still missing an author. :-) Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 01:25, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done. I typed it in improperly the first time. Gary King (talk) 01:34, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support I can't see anything wrong with the list. Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 01:37, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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