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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 19:31:30 27 March 2019 (UTC) [1].

Lo Nuestro Excellence Award[edit]

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Nominator(s): Erick (talk) 03:59, 26 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

After working on the Latin Grammy and Billboard Latin Achievement Awards, I finally to decide to do one for the Lo Nuestro Awards. The prose and table is based on what Jaespinoza has done for other articles related to the Lo Nuestro Awards. I look forward to your comments. Erick (talk) 03:59, 26 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments
    • "honoring excellence of an artist's contribution to Latin music" doesn't really make grammatical sense. How about simply "honoring an artist's contribution to Latin music"
    • "The Lo Nuestro Awards was" - were, surely.....?
    • "a tribute is held to the winner of the award where the winner" - think something's got a bit mangled here
    • The lead is really short at around 1200 characters (too short even for DYK), I think it needs an extra paragraph. Maybe you could talk about the different nationalities, highlight that only a couple of groups have received the award, that sort of thing. Also, is anything known about how the winner is chosen?
  • HTH -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:28, 27 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Hey @ChrisTheDude:, thanks for your comments, I believed I've addressed your issues. How does the length of the lead look now? Erick (talk) 12:13, 28 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Much better - now happy to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:19, 28 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Aoba47
  • I would revise this sentence (It was first awarded at the 2nd Annual Lo Nuestro Awardsin 1990 and has been presented annually since then.) to ( It was first awarded at the 2nd Annual Lo Nuestro Awardsin 1990 and has since been presented annually.) since it seems a little awkward to me to send a sentence with “then”.

Other than that one small/nitpicky comment, everything looks good. Once it is addressed, I will support it. If you have the time, I would greatly appreciate any help/input with my current FLC. Either way, have a wonderful rest of your weekend! Aoba47 (talk) 03:00, 10 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: Done, I'll see what I can do about your list. I haven't been so active in Wikipedia lately due to life. Erick (talk) 16:06, 11 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
No worries. I completely understand. I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 16:16, 11 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 19:31, 27 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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