Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Long Beach Motorsports Walk of Fame/archive1
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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 21 June 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]
Long Beach Motorsports Walk of Fame[edit]
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The Long Beach Motorsports Walk of Fame in downtown Long Beach, Southern California features many famous names in the world of American auto racing who have made a significant contribution to racing in the city. I expanded this list three months ago and believe it meets the FL criteria. All comments welcome MWright96 (talk) 16:16, 30 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support from Wretchskull
Nicely done! I have one inquiry though. Why not make the "By nationality" heading into a sub-heading? It is not really disconnected from the "Inductees" section. Wretchskull (talk) 22:07, 30 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Wretchskull: Done; many thanks for the support MWright96 (talk) 05:33, 31 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Support – only suggestions would be to change "Long Beach, Southern California" to just "Long Beach, California" and to archive sources where possible. Other than that, really great work! RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:42, 31 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @RunningTiger123: Done both MWright96 (talk) 21:07, 31 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "to recognise those who have made" - this is an American topic, so per WP:TIES that should be "recognize"
- "talks with the Economic Development Bureau of the City of Long Beach and officials" - if only the Bureau and the officials were involved then it should be "talks between"
- "teaching the public on the auto racing role" => "teaching the public about the auto racing role"
- The three entries for "....Racing" should probably just sort under the actual first letter, as "Racing" isn't a surname
- That's all I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:19, 1 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Have address all four of the queries raised above MWright96 (talk) 18:57, 1 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:02, 1 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – Pass[edit]
Will do soon. Aza24 (talk) 22:55, 5 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Formatting
- No issues, good job with consistency.
- Reliability
- Seems fine, nothing stands out as unreliable after looking through
- Verifiability
- Checked 12, 22, 30, 7, no issues
- Pass for source review
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:18, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.