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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:33, 15 June 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Miike Snow discography[edit]

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Nominator(s): Pancake (talk) 12:45, 14 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it meets the critera as it is complete and well-sourced. The lead was recently copy-edited. Pancake (talk) 12:45, 14 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It's been 10 days. Anyone wanna give this a look or...? Pancake (talk) 17:53, 24 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
OK, I'll kick off with this and check back in with more later:
  • "had moderate impact on charts in Belgium, Scotland, and the United Kingdom in 2009" - Scotland is part of the United Kingdom, so this really doesn't make sense as it's written. It would be like saying "had impact on charts in Texas and the USA". Upon further investigation it seems that there is a record chart for sales specifically in Scotland, but it's so minor that I really wonder if it's worth mentioning. If it is, then the sentence needs re-wording in some way to avoid the awkward "Scotland and the UK" thing..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:14, 25 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Removed Scotland on two occasions in the lead :) Pancake (talk) 20:33, 25 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Some more comments......
  • "Miike Snow is a Swedish indie pop band. Their discography consists" - is the group singular or plural? Worth checking the whole lead for consistency on this question.
  • "While describing their debut record [....], Happy to You was" - the album is the subject of the main part of the sentence, so the first clause isn't grammatically correct as it stands. I would suggest changing the first bit to "While the band described....."
  • "In addition to their studio efforts, Miike Snow has" - see above
  • You have a section described as "List of guest appearances with other performing artists" but one is not with any other artist. Either find another section to put that in or change the description of the section.
Think that's all I've got........... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:46, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
All issues addressed. Let me know what you think :) Pancake (talk) 15:41, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 18:19, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "Remixes" aren't listed in the opening line but seem quite important (both in the infobox and mentioned as the starting point for the band's career).
  • Which territory/territories are the release dates relevant to?
  • What does WW mean?
  • Avoid spaced hyphens (e.g. ref titles).

The Rambling Man (talk) 07:35, 9 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

All done! Pancake (talk) 20:51, 10 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 01:51, 14 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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