Wikipedia:Peer review/A Feast Unknown/archive1

A Feast Unknown[edit]

Okay, well, I wrote this a while ago. I think it is fairly comprehensive, well-referenced, well-written, etc., but would I think it would benefit if more people looked at it and/or commented on it. Thanks.--SB | T 03:58, 3 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 01:28, 9 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Somehow I preferred the crushing silence to the stunningly unhelpful automated suggestions... --SB | T 06:08, 11 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Some quick comments just to break the silence:
- "an American novel" - if it was specifically an example of "The American Novel" this might be worth stating, otherwise just "a novel" will do, maybe "a novel by American author, Philip José Farmer".
- "but there is some dispute"..."the novel is infamous for its" - says who? These statements need citations.
- The entire "Overview" section needs copyediting (it has a different style to the rest of the article) and references.
- "limited to 200 copies signed by Farmer" could be rephrased to make clear whether only 200 copies of the run were signed, or whether the run consisted solely of 200 signed copies.
- Some images would help. A limited number of photos of the cover art would be covered by the fair use provisions. Yomangani ^talk 12:52, 18 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]