Wikipedia:Peer review/Bon Scott/archive1

Bon Scott

The article has undergone a big cleanup in the past few weeks. I was wondering if anyone has any suggestions which might take this article to GA or FA. Thanks very much for your time. ĤĶ51→^Łalk 14:47, 24 February 2007 (UTC)

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 22:38, 26 February 2007 (UTC)

Overall I cannot find any issues with this article that would prevent me from rating it as a GA. Don't have any experience with FAs but there are some minor issues to address.

• Stenning, Paul; Rob Johnstone (November 2005). AC/DC - Two Sides to Every Glory. Chrome Dreams, 32-34. ISBN 1-8424-0308-7 should be listed as Stenning P., Johnstone R. (2005) with the full citation in the References section per the format used for Walker C. (1994)
• remove the brackets from the front of the Walker C.... citations.
• Not too keen on the format for the album/single lists - perhaps the format from Maria_Carey#Discography ?
• A few too many sentences starting On/In <date> X happened which gets a bit hard to read after the first few

  Try AC/DC released a box set named Bonfire as a tribute to Scott on 18 November 1997 instead of On 18 November 1997, a box set named Bonfire was released by AC/DC as a tribute to Scott for example

- Peripitus (Talk) 02:10, 27 February 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, I'll get to work on everything. ĤĶ51→^Łalk 17:53, 27 February 2007 (UTC)

I've worked on what you've said and I think the artice's looking much better now, but have you any more thoughts on it? ĤĶ51→^Łalk 21:02, 27 February 2007 (UTC)