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Books of Magick: Life During Wartime

I've been working on this for awhile and I believe I've covered everything that needs to be covered. I just wanted to see if its good enough to go through this process. (Stephen Day 03:25, 19 February 2006 (UTC))

The lead should give more information: What genre is the series in, how many issues the series had, maybe add a very general summary of the plot without giving anything away. The section Life During Wartime should have a different heading, as from that one, I'd have no idea what that section covers. Both Characters and Plot synopsis should probably be level-one sections anyway. The Publication history should be moved further to the top of the article (see Wikipedia:WikiProject_Comics/exemplars#Comic_book_series) and be expanded (was the series supposed to be 15 issues from the beginning or was it canceled, if so, for what reason). You can probably just merge it with the Origins section. The section How was this series received? should be retitled Reception or Critical reception, and expanded as well, giving more details (what did the favorable reviews say, how much copies were sold, etc).

"The artwork is done by Dean Ormston with one or two issues being exceptions." - That probably can be more specefic, can't it?

Also, I think there was some talk at the time the series debut that the change of Tim Hunter was made so he doesn't resemble Harry Potter that much anymore. Maybe you could add something about that, too? --Fritz Saalfeld (Talk) 11:17, 19 February 2006 (UTC)