Wikipedia:Peer review/Brown Mountain lights/archive1

Brown Mountain lights

I'd like to know if this article has GA possibilities, and what would need to be done to make it eligible. Thanks, Geogene (talk) 20:00, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

• "Viewing locations" needs a citation
• I suggest merging the last three paragraphs, as single sentence paragraphs are not desirable
• The long block quote is not needed in "John William Gerard de Brahm". Instead, explain why it is wrong or misquoted.
• The lede should be expanded to summarise the whole article.
• "Jerome Clark" is mentioned as a source, but it should also be used as an inline citation.
• Are there any other sources that can be used? WP:LIBRARY might have something.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 01:54, 11 May 2024 (UTC)