Wikipedia:Peer review/Dragon Quest VI: Maboroshi no Daichi/archive1
Dragon Quest VI: Maboroshi no Daichi[edit]
I've done a lot with this article and think it could be a good article, but Ill take a second opinion and Id love any suggestions. Any comments would be appreciated! Evaunit666 03:55, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 14:57, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
Great help. Thanks! Evaunit666 04:52, 27 July 2007 (UTC)