Wikipedia:Peer review/Fedor Emelianenko/archive1

Fedor Emelianenko[edit]

The article's been greatly improved recently and has been stable for a while, I would just like some input on what remaining improvements need to be made. east.718 02:12, 9 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

My biggest concern is the overall structure. It really needs to be re-worked chronologically. Right now the sections are internally consistent but the article jumps around in time.--BirgitteSB 22:03, 16 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

How would you suggest about going about such a task? I'm assuming you're talking about the last two paragraphs of the "martial arts background" section, but they really don't fit well in the remaining sections about his career. east.718 23:09, 16 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

You just integrate it. I would combine all the background as "Early life and amateur career" (if you can call it a career technically); then integrate everything from the RINGS period and then integrate everything from PRIDE years and the final bit is fine as it is. Integrate all the changes in training and club affiliation as they happen chronologically. Once that is done we will have a better idea what we are looking at and how it balances and flows together. On a side note, it would be nice if the big table what sortable. BTW my roomate swears he saw Cro Cop knock him out in a clip, do you think there was a point in that fight where Cro Cop knocked down but he somehow survived it?--BirgitteSB 02:26, 17 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the suggestions. I made the table sortable (admittedly quite hackishly), and will work on integrating later. As for your other question, the only time I recall Cro Cop knocking him down was when Emelianenko caught a high kick and rushed in for a trip takedown, but missed and went out of the ring. east.718 03:32, 17 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]