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Frank Zappa

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This article recently (narrowly, imo) failed a FAC. A few of the late reviers that ultimately contributed to the thumbs down suggested a PR before resubmission. Therefore this listing. Comments and suggestions most welcome. Note that compared to the version that was up for FAC, this version includes a section on Legacy at the end, which was also asked for at the FAC. There is deliberately no independent section on Personal Life, as Frank Zappa's life was his music and career, and because he was not a celebrity-style person with a life in media (like, e.g., Michael Jackson). This argument was accepted at the FAC, and therefore no such section exists.

Thanks for the attention, HJensen, talk 15:07, 11 September 2008 (UTC)