Wikipedia:Peer review/International response to the Holocaust/archive1

International response to the Holocaust[edit]

I think that the laundry list style of this article needs to be done away with. Some editors who have edited this article have had clear problems with POV. I feel that wording needs special attention in this article and new ideas for content need to be established. --Strothra 18:33, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Lot of POV, citations needed, and unnecessary adjs. --Osbus 21:34, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Agree with Osbus, much work needs to be done with this article.

Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.

This article has little/no images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under WP:IUP and WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.

This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.

There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.
The article has a few or too many inline external links, which hamper the readibility of the article. Please convert them to footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA.

This article might not be neutral and may be controversial in factual accuracy. Please make sure it is WP:NPOV, not WP:POV, by fixing potentially non-neutral sections and providing references to verify assertations.
Thanks, AndyZ _t 23:44, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]