Wikipedia:Peer review/Jack Harkness/archive1

Jack Harkness

Hi, I'm trying to get this article up to FA standard and I'd like to know whatever would help with that, and when the article would be ready to apply. I think I've cited it quite thoroughly, but I'd really appreciate a ... well, review... by peers. Thanks! :) ~Zythe^{Talk to me!} 22:54, 5 July 2007 (UTC)

Regarding the Dead Ringers parodies, can you source these episodes' dates? Alientraveller 21:16, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

Yup. Got them in my sights now. :) ~Zythe^{Talk to me!} 21:36, 6 July 2007 (UTC) EDIT: Cited. ~Zythe^{Talk to me!} 21:41, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

Review by MPJ-DK

I've just run an semi-automatic review script to give you a few inputs to work with. I'll be happy to look at it again after you've addressed the issues found by the script. The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

• Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.^[?]
• Per Wikipedia:What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.^[?]
• Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.^[?]
• There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
  • it has been
  • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).^[?]
• Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behaviour (B) (American: behavior), defense (A) (British: defence), defence (B) (American: defense), organise (B) (American: organize), recognise (B) (American: recognize), realise (B) (American: realize), isation (B) (American: ization), aging (A) (British: ageing), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
• Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): don't, Don't, Don't, don't, doesn't, didn't, didn't.

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas as well. hope it's helpful MPJ-DK 09:18, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll work on some of those. I'm back from Oxford now :D. ~Zythe^{Talk to me!} 23:37, 13 July 2007 (UTC)