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Maniots[edit]

The article is good since it contains well-edited content, as well as reliable sources. However, any other suggestions towards improving the article are more than welcome. Deucalionite 16:17, 4 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Looks quite nice, overall. A few minor issues, though:
  • First-level headings are not permitted in articles; all the headings need to be shifted down a level.
  • "Inline citations" can be simplified to "Citations"
  • Quotes should not be italicized (indeed, the article overuses italics in general), and longer ones should use blockquote formatting.
Beyond that, some stylistic copyediting would be helpful throughout. Kirill Lokshin 22:46, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]