Wikipedia:Peer review/Military history of Pakistan/archive1

I wrote this article. I just want to see what more needs to be done and what else is missing, any flaws, mistakes, etc...

Mercenary2k April 18, 2006 7:56 PM

Small issue, but per WP:MoS there should be no wiki-links in headings (like Six-Day War). Thanks, AndyZ _t 00:47, 19 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I fixed that. Anything else?? Mercenary2k April 18, 2006 9:44 PM

I made some wikilinks, most of which came out blue. 2 citation needed templates were added. One major grammatical fault fixed. The article reads comprehensive. However, some more references would perhaps be better. I shall try to put some citation needed templates if I point out some potential areas. Thanks.--Dwaipayanc 08:28, 21 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]