Wikipedia:Peer review/Muhajir (Pakistan)/archive2

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm planning to nominate this article for GA.

Thanks, FLA-ALP-1 (talk) 04:37, 18 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments after a quick skim:

"formal Hindi draws these aspects from Sanskrit; consequently, the two languages' mutual intelligibility effectively decreases as the factor of formality increases." needs a citation
Why doesn't ref 192 not have a page number?
Ref 310: Answers.com is considered an unreliable source.
Refs 132, 150, 300, and others: quotes are usually not necessary in a reference anymore and can be removed.

Hope these help. Z1720 (talk) 03:29, 24 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]