Wikipedia:Peer review/Osama bin Laden/archive1

Osama bin Laden[edit]

This article seems to be quite well written and of appropriate length to me, but I think someone with more peer reviewing experience should take a look. Atlantis Hawk 09:46, 22 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The article is, undoubtedly, very good, I think it can be promoted to GA easily. However, it misses two minor points. Firstly, the heading "Alleged deaths" is very POV, as it implies that these deaths were not true, while not disproving them. Secondly, a reference to the South Park episode Osama bin Laden Has Farty Pants should be made. I'm going to add the latter, but I thin it's better to wait for consensus about the NPOV concerns.--Orthologist 18:54, 26 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]