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Serial ATA

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I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it is an important topic that can easily attain Good Article status.

Thanks, KelleyCook (talk) 17:24, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

I find the wikilinking in the lead a bit confusing: AT Attachment and parallel ATA are both linked, but go to the same article. Something like 'SATA replaced the older standard, ATA (later redesignated parallel ATA)' would be clearer that these two terms refer to the same thing.

Four levels in the table of contents is a bit much; can those most deeply nested sections be merged? Alternatively, eliminate 'features' and promote the subheadings. Also, on my screen (1920x1200), there is a lot of white space in the connectors section due to the vertically oriented tables and small amounts of text.

I'm not informed enough to have an opinion on the eSATA article split, but the list in that section is unnecessary and contains information that would be better presented in a table. Also, the eSATA logo is a non-free image not being used to illustrate anything particularly relevant to the article (you're not commenting on the logo itself).

External links section needs pruning. Opabinia regalis (talk) 04:10, 13 July 2009 (UTC)