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SkyTrain (Vancouver)[edit]

This article has had a lot of work done to it. Most of the information is there, but there might be some key points missing. I have done a bit of work to get it to confirm WP:MOS, but may have missed a few things. -- Selmo 00:54, 14 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 23:43, 16 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Some suggestions:

Main suggestion: the article would need a history section. If I remember right, it has an interesting one, with local politics and NDP playing a large part.
1. The impact on the city should also be emphased and documented.
2. Detail/link/explain automated train.
3. Sky Tour shouldn't be a heading/section. It's a two sentence, semi-commercial information.
4. Design would go to a history section. Dig up the construction companies involved too.
5. The trivia can easily be incorporated in the article.
6. Some of the external links can be incorporated in the article as references.
7. The references section should be placed before the external links.
8. There are still some inline external links, all should be coverted to references.

--Qyd 15:47, 3 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]