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The Godfather[edit]

I am planning on rewriting this article for GA and then FA status. Any suggestions would be helpful. :) The Filmaker 02:32, 13 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Extend production information.
  • Cite differences from plot, don't make it part of synopsis.
  • Get better pictures, like everybody around Vito at the wedding and the aftermath of Michael committing his first kill.

WikiNew 19:44, 15 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • The Cast section seems more like a Characters list. Perhaps reverse the actor/character order and make it so?
  • Combine, in some way, the three tiny paragraphs about people who auditioned.
  • Citation 10 is blank.
  • More pictures would, indeed, be good.
  • I added a number of "citation needed"s. Please find sources for those sentences.

Polymathematics 17:46, 28 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • The lead seems somewhat short.
  • Incorporate the sentence-long section Release into Reaction.
  • As above, maybe a picture or two more.
  • I'd use any and all DVD special features/documentaries as much as possible since they probably can help verify much of what is yet to be referenced.
  • Ordering of sections: I tend to see it like this
  1. Production
  2. Plot
  3. Cast
  4. Release (sometimes incorporated into Reception)
  5. Reaction/Reception/Response (so many different names that essentially mean the same thing...)
  6. Soundtrack
  7. References
  • Sometimes, however, Production follows Cast. And I think Adaptations would follow Soundtrack, but don't quote me on that.

Cliff smith 20:04, 19 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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