Wikipedia:Peer review/Tonight, Tonight/archive1
Tonight, Tonight[edit]
An article about a single by The Smashing Pumpkins. Like "Today" (also being reviewed), it was recently made a Good Article and may have potential for Featuring with some work. Any comments toward improving it are welcome. --Brandt Luke Zorn 05:35, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
- The lead seems somewhat slight; add more and merge some of the paragraphs together. The background section seems superfluous at this point; we need something about the song itself there. And move the music video section below the reception secion. It also might be helpful to make a table for chart positions, a la "Smells Like Teen Spirit" or "What You Waiting For?". WesleyDodds 06:52, 26 April 2007 (UTC)