Wikipedia:Peer review/Transportation in Omaha/archive1

Transportation in Omaha[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to carry it through to featured article status, which I've never done. I would also like to use the reviews here to help hone my editing skills, which after I've created 300+ new articles I think need honing. Any suggestions about content, writing style or anything else are greatly appreciated.

Thanks,

– Freechild (¡!¡!¡!¡) 00:11, 25 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 00:47, 25 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'm concentrating mainly on the highways in these comments.

Was the Lincoln Highway built or designated in 1913? Often the construction of the road has nothing to do with its designation as part of a longer route.
You might want to mention some of the controversy with the North Freeway.
There are probably too many subsections; consider grouping some of them. I also note that highways, while mainly for automobiles, are not exclusively for them; "automobiles" is probably not the best title. It might be best to use mode rather than time as the main way of sorting.

I'm not very familiar with Omaha; sorry that I can't give more advice. --NE2 01:26, 26 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks NE2. I took all your advice and incorporated everything as best as I could. – Freechild (¡!¡!¡!¡) 14:19, 30 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]