Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/GLaDOS

GLaDOS[edit]

After getting bored one night and writing this article, I'm pretty satisfied with how it turned out. I just need some outside opinions of how to further improve it. - The New Age Retro Hippie used Ruler! Now, he can figure out the length of things easily. 22:10, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

All I can say is that the "In other media" section feels too small, i know there's a lot more out there! if not, then i would get rid of it, it just doesn't feel nessecary. milesaaway (talk) 10:24, 22 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

You've done a pretty good job here. I would say, though, that you do get off topic on a few parts, and it would be advisable to avoid spoilers if possible. Also, I feel like your wording at time could be a little clearer for those who have never played the game before, or who do not understand terms like "weighted companion cube." I've gone through and edited some stuff myself, but it's only been minor edits, so good job! Keep up the good work. --Fatedbreath (talk) 18:32, 16 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]