Draft talk:Seldon Charles Forrester Farmer

Close relationship suggested on draft page
User:Zaccwm - Wikipedia is the grandson of the subject of this page and has drawn together largely from the perspective of the career of Probation and teaching worldwide on the management of offenders. I presume it is for a reviewer to decide whether it is sufficiently objectively written, but this is certainly the intention. I have declared COI on my User page, please advise whether I have done this correctly as the message does not appear to be shifting, or do I have to do that personally? Many thanks Zaccwm (talk) 13:31, 16 February 2024 (UTC)

Moving discussion here from user talk page
Hi Thank you for your suggestions to improve this article and make it more reflective of the Wikipedia style of presentation. I believe I have done this now and hope it is now sufficiently robust to warrant publication. Many thanks for your assistance. Zaccwm (talk) 16:29, 16 February 2024 (UTC)


 * @Zaccwm, thank you for your message. I will have a look at it when I find a moment. Please use this draft talk page for communications regarding the draft rather than my user talk page? That way, the conversation will be seen by other reviewers and editors who have seen the draft. Thanks! Netherzone (talk) 18:04, 16 February 2024 (UTC)