Talk:18 Miles Out/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 20:35, 10 March 2012 (UTC)

Issues: As you can see, only a few small issues. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Picture: Give the screenshot a better rationale.
 * Should be good. If it needs to be changed, please notify.
 * Intro: "The episode features the climax of Rick and Shane, in which the two men ensue in a fight." Change to "The episode features a climactic exchange between Rick and Shane, wherein two men engage in a fight.
 * Production: Maybe add who directed and wrote the episode?
 * Production: "Cameras were utilized at an angle that caused the allusion that the vehicle did hit the actors' legs." Change to "The cameramen filmed the shots at an angle, creating the illusion that the vehicle did hit the actors' legs."
 * Production: "Cameras were utilized at an angle that caused the allusion that the vehicle did hit the actors' legs." Change to "The cameramen filmed the shots at an angle, creating the illusion that the vehicle did hit the actors' legs."
 * Production: "Cameras were utilized at an angle that caused the allusion that the vehicle did hit the actors' legs." Change to "The cameramen filmed the shots at an angle, creating the illusion that the vehicle did hit the actors' legs."
 * Should be good to go. :) —DAP388 (talk) 01:27, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good!--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:02, 11 March 2012 (UTC)