Talk:1988 Czechoslovak - New Zealand Mount Everest Southwest Face Expedition

Issues
hello there. This article still has many problems. For example, the lede doesn't make a lot of sense and doesn't really introduce the article well. The rest is written poorly with not many sources. I think that large portions of the article should be removed or move it back to draftspace. Kind regards, Willbb234Talk (please &#123;&#123;ping&#125;&#125; me in replies) 18:15, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi, disagree, it can be improved and has enough sources to be in mainspace though more would be welcome. moving it to draftspace would be unnecesary and I would oppose it. Have you tried translating sections of the main source?,regards Atlantic306 (talk) 00:57, 12 February 2021 (UTC) amended Atlantic306 (talk) 08:33, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I don't understand what you mean by translating sections of the main source? Willbb234Talk (please &#123;&#123;ping&#125;&#125; me in replies) 17:38, 13 February 2021 (UTC)
 * The book source Atlantic306 (talk) 02:06, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
 * yes, but why does it need translating and what 'sections'? Willbb234Talk (please &#123;&#123;ping&#125;&#125; me in replies) 10:13, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
 * To help the sourcing, and the page number sections that are referenced, imv Atlantic306 (talk) 04:01, 16 February 2021 (UTC)