Talk:1998 Yeosu submersible incident

Suggestions
I have just completed the B class checklist and feel that this article could be improved by addressing the following:


 * Referencing: a clearer list of references could be added, also in-line citations could be used to help the verification process (essential for a successful B class rating);
 * Grammar: the article needs a copy edit for grammar, also a copy edit against the WP:MOS. E.g. two different styles of dates are used in the article.
 * Structure: the addition of a Notes, References, See also and External links sections might help add details/supporting materials to the article.

Just a few ideas. Once you feel it is ready, you might like to seek re-assessment by including the article name on the list at WP:MHA. Also, if you would like more detailed feedback, this can be obtained by including the article on the list at WP:MHPR. Hope this helps. AustralianRupert (talk) 06:55, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

(Comment)

 * Was this officially called a ‘Battle’. Seems to be a bit of an overstatement. Incident might be a better word. Chwyatt (talk) 07:33, 29 March 2010 (UTC)

Battle?
As mentioned above, "Battle" is pushing it a bit; the two articles in the See Also list were bigger affairs, yet were only termed "incidents". Unless there are any objections I would propose to move this page to Yeosu incident. Thoughts? Xyl 54 (talk) 01:13, 2 December 2020 (UTC) PS: The same probably goes for the other post-armistice engagements listed in the naval engagements template. Three of them are titled "Battle", but none of them were more than a skirmish. Xyl 54 (talk) 01:18, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I boldly changed the name to make it more like other similar incidents. Mztourist (talk) 04:00, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Updating
I viewed the Korean version of this page, and it provides additional sources and details. I've translated the Korean article into English and am in the process of verifying sources. There's a few other online archives that I have in mind that might have a bit more information. I intend to overhaul this page as soon as I feel comfortable with my draft and the sources. I've been itching to research and write something and this was the first Korea-related page I saw that was listed as needing some work. Irojyo (talk) 02:39, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Provided the sources are reliable you're welcome to add to the page. Mztourist (talk)