Talk:2005 Erbil bombing

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Azhiajoy. Peer reviewers: Haleymfro.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 16:32, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

WP:Wiki_Ed/New_England_College/Global_Issues_(Fall_2017)
IMHO, as the creator of this page, the student assignment left it in a poor state, which I've only found out 3 years later. I have, I hope, fixed a lot of 'problems' here 220  of  ßorg 16:28, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Lots of superfluous content was added. For example, a discussion of religious terrorism in the lede, is off-topic.
 * A section on "Other Bombings that happened in Erbil", belongs in a 'See also' section, not the body text. Or on the cities page.
 * A long para on the perps. Ansar al-Sunna, is not required.
 * Headings not in normal WP format, only bolded, so had no table of contents
 * Same references used multiple times without using refnames, about 4 times over!