Talk:2013 Sparks Middle School shooting

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mackbishop.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:45, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

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I am editing this page as part of a class project https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_Mississippi/Writing_with_Wikipedia_(Fall_2016) I created this page because I saw the need for it when looking through the school shootings within the last ten years. This page was very simple and just touched the basis of the shooting when I first looked at it. I believe that my edits are within the guidelines of the editing community, but welcome feedback either here on this discussion page or on my talk page Mackbishop (talk) 21:05, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Explained undo reasons on editor's talk page. Meters (talk) 23:04, 18 October 2016 (UTC)

Recent edits 10/27/2016
I again have reverted additions from the above editor.
 * 1) A search result cannot be used as a source (abcnews.com). You must cite the specific story that verifies the specific fact.
 * 2) It appears you are drawing conclusions from your sources rather than paraphrasing them. This is an encyclopedia, not a term paper. We draw no conclusions, we simply report on what facts others have published and possibly on the conclusions they have drawn, although you certainly should have a concensus to add any conclusions in this instance. It doesn't appear there are any firm conclusions so speculation on what they might be is not appropriate.
 * 3) The style you are using is not encyclopedic.  I'm referring to the word followed by a colon, then a line space followed by your text. Look at some other articles.
 * 4) The secret service report has no place in this article. It isn't about this event, and any use of it would be WP:OR.

Finally, this is a collaborative project. Multiple editors have contacted you and you have yet to respond. Pretty hard to collaborate if you don't communicate, eh? John from Idegon (talk) 17:34, 27 October 2016 (UTC)