Talk:20th century women's fitness culture

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2021 and 10 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Surzae.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 16:41, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Fixing Essay-Like Issues
I have gone back and made several adjustments to the article in hopes of making it not essay like. My partner in this project will be fixing the linking problems and will hopefully get to that soon. I have added more references to statements that appear to have been opinion when in reality they are the research of professionals. I have also deleted sections of the article that were simply opinions and very biased. Please let me know if there are still major issues with the article! I am grateful for your feedback. Josienewmansmith (talk) 03:21, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review From Shayla Bell
I absolutely love how the article is organized by decades because it flows a lot better when reading, the links that I clicked worked and were reliable, and the article is pretty neutral in tone except that last sentence in the introduction only because it makes a connection that I feel needs to be cited. The things I feel would help is that commercial developments of the 1900-1920s is underrepresented, and the introduction does not really encompass the entirety of the article in my personal opinion. Technical factors that would also help are linking journal articles if they can be linked and some minor spelling/grammar mistakes, but other than that, it looks really great! .Scbell24601 (talk) 23:03, 21 March 2019 (UTC)