Talk:Abbey Dawn

Currently, Abbey Dawn (with the name capitalized) redirects to a paragraph in the Avril Lavigne article.hoi The content there should be incorporated into this article. Once this article is ready, I will request that the redirect be deleted so that this article can take its place, as it will be more comprehensive than the current paragraph in Lavigne's article. (EhJJ)TALK 03:14, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

Paragraphs
On seeing the article first I noticed that every paragraph is made only of one or two lines. So this means you should overthink whether all the headlines are usefull or if you can add more content. I hope you'll take some time on this or at least answer me. --Oli (talk) 17:29, 1 December 2008 (UTC)