Talk:Abdul Raziq Achakzai

Military career
I decided to remove the information written in the 'introduction' section since it was repeated in 'fight against the Taliban' section. Also I changed the heading to 'military career'. If my edit was unconstructive, do let me know.Abhishek9779 (talk) 19:23, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 22 October 2018
Dear Sir/Madam,

Raziq Achakzai was a hero for Afghan people. I don't know who wrote this wrong statement about him that he was a murderer of children. Please get more reference before you publish a statement like this. People in Afghanistan love him and this kind of statement makes a gap between the people and Wikipedia. 2603:3024:17FD:0:A893:C85F:E51D:62 (talk) 17:05, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Red question icon with gradient background.svg Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. &mdash; KuyaBriBri Talk 19:15, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

Suggest adding a sentence to lead concerning human rights abuses
The recent NY Times reporting on his human rights abuses (which another editor already added to the article) is so extensive, damning and important that I think the topic should at least be mentioned in the lead. Perhaps adding a sentence like this at the end of the lead:

"A New York Times investigation documented extensive human rights abuses by Achakzai's forces, including hundreds of forced disappearances and dozens of extrajudicial killings." Jameson Nightowl (talk) 02:44, 23 May 2024 (UTC)