Talk:Ah Girls Go Army

Style of Language used in Synopsis
, the language you are insisting to use for the synopsis is not neutral and non-emotional as per WP:WORDS. The language used on Wikipedia is not meant to be entertaining or promotional, while what you are striving for sounds more like marketing material. Can we please reinstate the way I had rephrased the synopsis, which was striving to phrase it neutrally? Please do refer to synopses or plot summaries written on other movie articles, such as Once Upon a Time in the West, Ip Man (film), Money No Enough, etc. -- Sentimex (talk) 08:24, 16 February 2022 (UTC)