Talk:Air stagnation

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Lizarteaga9 (talk) 21:47, 13 October 2023 (UTC)Most of the information in the article is relevant and has information about air stagnation, however it does talk a little further about what it could lead to, which is not necessarily relevant. What distracted me the most about this article were how short the sentences were and the amount of links that were not evenly spread out. Some of this information could be out of date since most of the references are from the early 2000's and since then, there has been much more information that has been discovered about air stagnation. In addition, the climate has changed which has effected how frequent air stagnation occurs. There could be information on what air stagnation is or looks like instead of the phenomenon about it. We could also talk more about the causes and effects of air stagnation and more relevant information on how it is currently a problem. What we could improve is adding more paragraphs, more accurate links and references, and definitely work on the flow of the information throughout. Some information is presented accurately but it could definitely be better. In addition, there are several links to other Wikipedia articles, but there should be edits surrounding what articles to keep or not.Lizarteaga9 (talk) 21:47, 13 October 2023 (UTC)