Talk:Allan G. Brodie

WikiProject class rating
This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 14:22, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

Reluctantly held the quality to the "start" status because it could so easily move into at least a C or B status if someone were to clear the weasel words, create additional sections, provide in-line citations. Pknkly (talk) Pknkly (talk) 14:33, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Weasel Words
"prominent orthodonist." - Who says? The article looks very good. Removing this and simply saying orthodonist would be not detract from prominence, but it will improve the quality of the article. Pknkly (talk) 14:32, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

"An internationally renowned orthodontics teacher," - Who says? Simply state orthodontics teacher. Pknkly (talk) 14:32, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

"was considered Dr. Angle’s best student" - By whom? Pknkly (talk) 14:32, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Good article will be better if the above is changed. Pknkly (talk) 14:32, 8 April 2009 (UTC)